What a joke those stupid tests are! I probably read more non-fiction than fiction. I believe you are right. SF is a subset of literature, which has its own tropes, such as the unwed mother, the cruel father, the buried treasure, the midnight phone call, and so forth. As for the factory approach, there are ways to use a formula to help your writing; Ill get to those in an upcoming post. Biographies, science, modern history particularly WWII, ecology, and anything else that looked interesting. . I found about 8 different publishers, but only one looked even slightly likely to take my book. Telestosaturnas, thanks for this. Your ancestor, like most others in his day, probably had a great many skills and did a lot of things for himselffor example, home building and maintenance, food processing, sewing, tool repair, etc. I dream of a bigger space where I can have a dedicated work table, but just keeping my current tools, project bits and a portable workspace in an accessible corner makes it *feel* easier and I have a visual reminder of what Im working on. I mean, who reads Gordon Dicksons Dorsai series today, either? Three separate copies (two editions) of Halls book are available complete from the Hathi Trust: https://babel.hathitrust.org/cgi/pt?id=uc1.b4320386&view=1up&seq=1, https://babel.hathitrust.org/cgi/pt?id=uiug.30112010448964&view=1up&seq=9, https://babel.hathitrust.org/cgi/pt?id=mdp.39015008650197&view=1up&seq=7. Regarding the 5th Wednesday, Steiner comes up here now and then. Find stories, updates and expert opinion. I wrote this at the very end of the last cycle and dont know if you saw it. Really put me off going into any corporate bookstore again, it did. Stephen Krashen has/had as one of his principles the idea that you need comprehensible input to acquire a language. (One of them once remarked to me, apropos of a branch that suddenly fell and just missed wrecking our house and killing one or both of us, Those very large old trees often fall considerately. Wow! Thanks, Drew. Thank you for this. Successfully nipped that enterprise in the bud. And a heartfelt thanks to all the commenters who add to the breadth and sanity of this space JMG has nurtured. I conserved the use of my typewriter because of the cost of the cartridges and because I was afraid of running out of cartridges on a Sunday, when the stores were closed (as they were in those days) the day before the paper was due. Ive written several books on that theme already, of course, but a review may be in order. Yet thank you JMG I appreciate learning that a lot. As a result, when I use slang, colloquialism, snide talk or any kind of offbeat language, I do it deliberately. You can write what to them is a normal day where nothing particularly out of the ordinary happens, but its so unfamiliar to the audience theyre hooked. Perhaps what I should do is meditate on your 15 minutes a day and see if I can somehow swing it. As for outlines, why, if they work for you, by all means. But evil, no. Coding is NOT a predictable, rote, assembly line process: its a creative process. Thank you. What really drives me up the wall, sometimes to the point that I cant stand to look at a manuscript anymore, is when new ideas keep intruding in the middle of writing. This essay really resonated with me. I have a few things relevant to this brilliant essay of yours, but I will dole it out bit by bit. So the flute it was. I have enjoyed every minute of writing it (and now doing the editing/proofreading). Now do the same kind of analysis with each of your ten favorite hard SF novels. In fact, some teachers told me that I wrote well. People brought up in the USA school system have no such luxury. Regarding the 5th Wednesday: As for a Fifth Wednesday topic.. Id vote for anything and everything esoteric related. An Energy Vampire attaches themselves to your energy body by creating cords that connect the However, I suppose that the very usualness of such experiences back then would have lessened their impact of any individual child.). Ive added your vote to the list. Anyone whos programmed computers for a living may (or should) have come across a similar concept: The real problem is that programmers have spent far too much time worrying about efficiency in the wrong places and at the wrong times; premature optimization is the root of all evil (or at least most of it) in programming. Donald Knuth, The Art of Computer Programming. For my money, Robert Louis Stevenson is a master of diction. But at least I know a big chunk of the beginning and middle are done, also with an ending. Its been awhile, but that would be interesting, @pygmycory: Stockhausen had a thing he liked to say about the musicians he worked with, because his piece involved scored elements as well as improvisation or intuitive music. ..OK volunteers for a study on Birch-tree allergy. Power Chords could also be applied to deindustrial fiction or mashup power chords from different genres. One remedy for that was the development of mission type tactics. He dedicated a whole blog post to that poem, and I read it, too, though I cant yet say it has really touched me. Unaware, yes. So you send them a manuscript theyd rather strip naked and crap in public than publish, and while theyre figuring out how to say no! loudly enough, you place a different manuscript with someone else. You make a style sheet however you want to. Kyle (no. Youre absolutely right, IMHO. Its supposed to do the same thing for IT that The Goal did for manufacturing. I have work to do. Im really glad Steven Jones didnt let not being a guitarist stop him from going on with the Sex Pistols, for instance. I read several of his novels when I was a teenager (a looong time ago) and decided to reread his books again. Further down the curve, recorders are easy to make from wood with relatively simple tools, and you dont need electricity to play them, or a vehicle to transport them (unless youre talking contrabass recorders those are huge). As an aside, I think having alternatives for the commoners to adopt helps to focus the elites attention on reality. It sounds awfultheres a famous episode where he was beaten for being unable to learn his spelling lesson. Does anyone have experience of democratic schools like Summerhill in Britain and Sudbury Valley in America? Its a credit that anyone gets out of the system these days with any sense about them. I am in love with dressmaking folk clothing, old-style and recent. He doesnt offer much help there although he did put out a paper that analyzed the improvement in English of a group of Korean women who read the Sweet Valley High series of books! Fortunately my faith in the power of Arthur and Merlin was restored after reading Jack Whytes astounding and gritty Arthurian saga. Thatll learn him! Northwind Grandma yes please, keep learning and saving that info. Granted, a third of the previous book area now sells toys and junk. Define yourself by what you own! Do something? A southerner and a yankee say that vowel very differently. Dudley, thats exactly the sort of academicism I was talking about; Im glad you made it out with your talent not wholly crushed! And I have already found a few small press publishers that sound perfect for my book. Thanks for visiting The Crossword Solver "perplexed". JMG, if youre looking for ideas for a fifth Wednesday post, my suggestion would be to analyze what makes initiatives for change in society succeed or fail. Any recommendations for good titles would be appreciated. and put it into genre fic. So I spent my years in college experiencing a weird dichotomy where people would read my stories, become engrossed, laugh, etc., then shake their heads at me when they finished. Then I scribble down a first draft, leaving blank spaces where I dont yet have complete lines (or any lines at all), and from there my process isnt quite writing or editing in the usual sense its much more like filling in the blanks in a crossword puzzle, where Ill try one word or phrase after another to see if it fits. I write chapter by chapter. Looking on my education bookshelf, for learning manual skills I have: The Instructor, the Man, and the Job by Charles Allen Training Within Industry by Donald Dinero Toyota Talent by Jeffery Liker and David Meier Training at the Speed of Life by Ken Murray Build a Bette Athlete by Michael Yessis Secrets of Russian Sports Fitness and Training by Michael Yessis (this one is basically a book-length version of Ivan Dragos training montage from Rocky IV. JMG, I had an interesting experience last night. I do at least teach write a crappy first draft, edit later. I know nobody else has suggested it so it is unlikely to win. Is your story Awesome, Boring, Confusing, or Dumb? I have a further review of the book over on the Green Wizards site here: Book Review: Career Indie Author by Bill and Teresa Peschel. The second, is the one you send out. I dont think anyone has grappled with the occult reasons for internet cat obsession, not a pawprint or hairball in sight. Anyone else? Theyve done fine, in the long run, but with the other things that were part of my fate path in highschool, dropping out might have gotten me further on a darker road, and Im glad that didnt happen. BTW, my 14 y.o. Otherwise the best we can do is create a world in which some people pursue magnificence and the rest whether by conditioning or circumstance or lack of ambition are effectively servants lurching through prearranged functions. For next post, Id like to learn about practical ways of not being carried away by the social tsunami that is happening right now. Look for a software technical writing job. This is highly unacceptable as it impedes propaganda based control techniques. Any recorder made by them is usually decent. Anyway writing seems to be both a cursive and recursive practice. Cant you see that?? Credit where credit is due, MZB knew what she was doing as a money making process. They buy quite a few titles from small publishers and self published authors. And my professors made me fear it. I would like to learn more about how people who dont think like me, think. Where does everything go? My 9 year old is way ahead in reading/writing. (I link to John C. Wrights posting-and-criticism of it because The Nation, where it was originally published, has apparently seen fit to disappear it.). If one doesnt know what one doesnt know, how can (s)he ever get to a point of knowing it? No film adaption of a Chandler novel comes close, although The Big Sleep wasnt bad. No, I type my first draft responses onto an open Notepad document, review them, and then copy and paste into the comment field. They can be hard work, both for the children themselves as well as their parents: the group dynamics, learning to take responsibility, governing the school, actually being invested in ones education and development, it takes time and effort, it really does. For the fifth Wednesday, I would really like to hear the full post-length story of what happened with the Egyptian elites use and abuse of magic. It made my day and gave me some renewed enthusiasm about my prospects. That was fine initially, since I went into the sciences, and I have made big strides in learning more about the rest of the world, history, cultures, religion. My writers block stems from persistent bouts of brain fog after getting a disastrous implant a few years back, and then moving into an environment that exacerbates it, plus being plum too busy since then. Folks got tired of being shot at when they went hunting and fishing. Aldarion, so noted; I plan on covering some of that in the first December post, but well see. Now back to writing for me! Your advice on analyzing text from a writers perspective is sound, though I rarely do it myself. You know the questions, whats your shoe size, your blood type, your sexual orientation, your phone number, your email address, with all the back and forth about how that phone number doesnt come up in our system, would you like to sign up now, its free. Of course, it also pays to have wise relations and family friends. Reloading the webpage before posting prevents the problem. (Good writing can do that.). I dont know if that would fly today I hated it when he moved on. I have a novel just about ready to send to a publisher, a kind of apocalyptic farce. More on this in forthcoming posts. Its a set of skills that, to cite Bradley again, anyone can learn if they can write a literate English sentence. Its that the bosses might read it themselves and be forced to confront the reality of what their preferred policies are doing to the people affected by them. Theyd have the kids recite a section in unison, then talk about the grammar and prosody. Tolkiens The Lord of the Rings and produced what many people consider the 20th centurys masterpiece of nasty, unfair, and inaccurate criticism: Ooh, Those Awful Orcs. I know someone who has worked for the establishment first as a journalist and now as a teacher, hes never seen a PMC/Leftest position he doesnt swallow hook line and sinker. However, this new tactic made it necessary to restructure the army and the educational system as a whole. My vote for the fifth Wednesday post is the various impacts on mental health that the end of the belief in progress could cause, the psychological pitfalls people may fall into, and ways in which people can escape from them. Solve your "stupid" crossword puzzle fast & easy with the-crossword-solver.com Heres a story to keep in mind when you get told, as of course you will, that real writers go to creative writing programs to learn how to write. The section where they buy and resell used books was almost empty, as if there was no employee buying anymore. It also had a much wider tolerance of what was considered normal, and I stopped getting bullied when I shifted to that school. Still, not a single house in the street is the same as any other one (I have made all pairwise comparisons!). If all you can spare is fifteen minutes for writing, write for those fifteen minutes. I believe that one reason private and charter schools can do better than the public schools is they can expel the discipline problems. But I think there needs to be room to still explore as research on a topic opens new avenues, for nonfiction. This does raise an interesting point, though. But so many others Id talked to had the same thing it makes me wonder. A few days ago, on the subway train, while re-reading After Progress, chapter 5, wherein we look at the vast expenditures on the mirage of Fusion Power as an illustration of the waste of resources on pointless exploration by the Clerisy in our world which worships progress, I chanced to look up and right there in front of me was a poster for ..are you sitting down? If the teachers were nice, theyd let me sit in the back and read quietly while everyone else took a year to learn the materials. Each child has distinct strengths and weaknesses when it comes to learning, and one of the ways these function is that children become ready to learn different things at different ages. Otherwise no money. 2): Oh, Ive read this! Some of it might actually have been good, but the way they approached it took all the joy out of reading it. I found my place! Kishotenketsu Exploring the Four Act Story Structure. What do we WANT to wear? Ray, in that case choose your own path and go with it. Someone upthread had some good suggestions for musical toys for toddlers. Relatively few (more girls than boys, if I remember rightly) of my schoolmates went on to college. It was the first enthusiastically positive depiction of a gifted child Id ever seen. James Patterson has advice online about writing genre fiction. I figured that would be enough to innoculate them against the school system they would need to endure for the reast of their childhood. Scotlyn, thanks for this! The air had the damp foretaste of rain. I schooled them in the usual ways of pronouncing each letter and letter-combination in English, and together we applied that knowledge to reading the small Peanuts books that were being published at the time. It has never worked for me. That one seemed to be pretty good also, but higher education was Im sure quite a bit different even as recently as Irvings time. Maybe JMGs possible future post on Yeats will open some door there! If you must admit a person was involved then it must be completely irrelevant who that person is. I am interested in clothes using fabrics made on a loom, pirate shirt is my starting point. And it was not a compliment. That works just fine, but what Ive found really amps up the creativity for some reason is classical music. With writing as with acting, there are some people who are naturally gifted but there are many more who can become capable and enjoyable if only theyre helped to learn how to learn. Stephen, so noted and counted (in a timely manner, too!). What do you do with a kid like that? Dictions an essential tool and these days its a neglected one. A reallly inspiring piece, thanks. Okay, so it was mostly junk sci-fi and fantasy adventures, but I could consume a book a day sometimes two. I am still surprised by how one person can get so completely fracked if they follow conventional wisdom. They liked his writing until they met him with his guide dog. Okay, it was a pot of message, but still. In my college days, back when computers were still room-sized mainframe IBMs with tape spools and punch cards, I hand-wrote multiple drafts of my college papers, completely re-writing each new draft, as improvements would formulate each time I read the latest draft. Justin, so noted and entered into the count. In the last three years Ive had two articles published in a good journal, with another one that has been accepted for the spring issue. If youre like most people, however, youre convinced that you cant write well enough to get published. It followed the familiar model of group work on harvests and quilting bees; it was busy, disorderly, and remarkably effective, and it made literacy, numeracy, and a solid stock of general knowledge about the world all but universal in mid-19th century America. Again, thanks for these heartening posts, and thanks to everyone here for all the comments. Also bizarrely, my grandfather had a severe allergy to sycamore trees I forget exactly how they affected him, but he couldnt touch them at all or be around them too long. It is possible to get a job as a professional writer without much practice writing or editing. These are very heartening and fortifying. A child taught phonics can figure out how to read a word he or she has never encountered before in print. He was a huge reader on the history of different religions. Following a bumpy launch week that saw frequent server trouble and bloated player queues, Blizzard has announced that over 25 million Overwatch 2 players have logged on in its first 10 days. The English department was all about eliminating passive voice by any and all means, the Engineering department demanded passive voice exclusively, the research is what matters, not the person. I'm quite aware that the concept of polite discourse is hopelessly dowdy and out of date, but then some people would say the same thing about the traditions this blog is meant to discuss. It was ousted in the US by the efforts of Horace Mann and his followers, who idolized the Prussian governments system of regimented public schools with children divided by age into fixed classes and lots of rote drills. If you are able to homeschool in the early years I would recommend it, it was amazing for us all. Never ever write for the Federal Government. (I notice the simultaneous editing I engage in ). Needless to say, I was not a popular kid on the playground. Its the same thing here in Spain. Given the unfolding energy crisis in Europe, maybe a discussion of the role of firewood in society and its ecological impacts would be an interesting topic. Obviously I know the alphabet and how letters work, but I see each word as its own symbol presumably what reading Japanese and Chinese is like. It seems we will have a Thelma and Louise race to the bottom of the canyon between the k-12 school system and the higher ed system. Get comfortable again with the process of putting your thoughts on paper. Jeff Russell (no. I am now 70 and dont care what anyone thinks except that is not true I do not have the benefit of Aspergers, if it is a benefit, I am still too heavily influenced by others and therefore I insulate myself from them and avoid what they think. In far too many cases, the members of such a group arent your friends, theyre your competition, and theyll stomp your writing into the mud in order to climb over it to promote their own. If only to clue you in to the idea of working at a thing to get better at it, And of course there is the whole lets suppress talent and competition program. Suicides keep rising, and most families have members who are struggling. I would like to add, perhaps at the risk of attracting some slight criticism from you, that when it comes to writing non-fiction, then outlining helps. Thank you for these great posts in your series on writing/publishing. Jessica #282, another another detail is that trying to read joined-up writing is agony to me. (5), PERPLEXED I do a lot of back and forth editing as I go because I write long, convoluted plots so I have to fix things. Or reconciling contradictions. It was an eye-opener to finally realize that maybe, just maybe, I CAN learn a foreign language. Did you ever see Chandlers Hollywood cameo? Thus far, behavioral economists did predominantly experimental work that uncovered discrete manifestations of peoples bounded rationality: representativeness, availability, anchoring, overoptimism, base-rate neglect, hindsight bias, loss aversion, and other misevaluations of probability and utility. Im thinking especially of a short piece he did for one of the pulp magazines titled The King in Yellow, complete with several little nods to the Robert W. Chambers stories about that eldritch personage. (It was he who actually first discovered his mother lying dead on the floor of their kitchen.) Nature Spirituality in the Twilight of the Industrial Age. Unpersoning a person is one thing, destroying art (even if it is not Art), is another. I dont think I process English quite how others do. Does anyone else have a subject they really dont want to hear me chatter about? Your approach in those two stories was another, and worked very well. I mustve had enough natural talent that even they had to give me credit and encourage it to some degree. It seems reasonable. Both books can easily be found and downloaded for free from the web nowadays. I had some decent teachers and some awful ones, but the structure of the institution kept the experience of schooling from being anything but misery for me. Falcon wasnt bad, but Chandler just resonates so much closer to my frequency. Choose a character who will be affected by it, and sketch out some ideas for what he or she or it will do. Between the raw misery of the schools and the academicism of the universities, very few people come through their schooling without having their ability to write stunted. Maybe theres room for a business model that involves money for stuff, out the door with no questions asked in a variety of things and one of those includes books? (denim; twill) One day, a garment will have value. I took your advice JMG, and went to two local bookstores to see if I could find books somewhat like mine and find out who published them. The black population in the school was probably over half, which was considered a disadvantage to academic standing. b) Sergeants who had to figure out themselves how to achieve specific tasks. Believe me, Ive read some awful text. I never looked into it further and if I remember right, also, William S. Burroughs had some things to say about it. Another essay with more practical tips on writing than I got in my 4 years of high school! If you have no natural gift for writing, you may not achieve greatness, but if you work at it you can learn how to tell stories, write poems, or craft nonfiction that people will enjoy reading. I just knew I was excited to major in engineering in college because I would never have to write again! However I have NEVER been able to thing of a story. Cliff, you can certainly extrapolate from that example to every other university literature program Ive ever had personal contact with. My first vote is for a discussion on limits and their use in poetry. It had a narrative density unlike anything else nearly every scene advancing multiple plot threads. In fact, a number of countries have public school systems that seem to be better than the German and Canadian ones. It helps the connections in the brain to develop. If you try a lot of recipes, youll get a feeling what gives a meal an Asian character or a German or British or whatever. Like a fresh-water fish swimming in salt water, was my judgment on the most corporate, where I was working as an agency-sent temp, and even the best of the jobs, the university mailroom, was like a fresh-water fish swimming in brackish water.. Fear is in the horizon. This one was known as Master ORourkes and classes were held in Master ORourkes house. They use short words a lot. 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